Riddle B

Tried my first "haiku-riddle", tell me your opinions about it (be honest, of course !!) and write your answer in the review ;)

I fall from the sky,

humans watch my decay from

behind their windows.

Author's Note

The answer is ... Rain.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A haiku that is a riddle... awesome. I love how you did rain as "humans watch my decay" that is awesome. Very nice, love this. Your riddles are fun, and just enough clues to piece them together, and the clues you write are interesting just like "humans watch my decay" which is the part I like most in this.

[Pritesh]

Awesome i liked how you described rain in your poem!good write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Or indeed birds!

[To be scene To be heard..]

wow this is Rain!

[emman]

RAIN :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good use of words. Sort of a mystery is left. It could be different from the window you are looking out. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CourtneyShay]

ummmm is it rain???? and i love it

[devon]

I'm guessing rain? :)

And it was good! Nothing wrong with it.

[Lumière Dé..]

Either rain or leaves. But why would you watch leaves from behind your window? Yeah. Rain