Brezza d'estate (translation below)

Hope you like it :) Waiting for your opinions =D

Brezza d'estate

che rinfreschi il sole

sulla mia pelle.

Translation: Summer wind

Summer wind

that refresh the sun

on my skin.

Author's Note

Trying a haiku in italian (where i'm able to count syllabs xD)
Got the inspiration from a wind that "refreshed" my skin today at school, i know it's just spring but it was so hot i felt it was summer !!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice inspiration form your author's note, as well as a really nice and refreshing haiku. Enjoyed.

[Thea]

T'was a great haiku...Wonderful...
Thanks for sharing.
:)))

[Cassie Fraga]

well that was a great haiku and fun read!! thank you for sharing!!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautiful. Glad to see you finally tried a haiku. haha :)

Nicely done.

[MandaBear]

very cool :)

[CourtneyShay]

awww i like that

[Breann S.]

I nearly had it translated myself! So close.
I really enjoyed this one. It's a beautiful little image.

[Roe]

i love this poem. the colors of the words show off the poem but they dont take the beauty of the words meaning

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem said it all. A powerful sun can bring life out of a dead spirit. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote