De poetarum corde

De poetarum corde

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
"

The title is in latin, it means "about the poets' heart"

"
It can catch the
world's essence in the fly
of a butterfly.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
first time trying something so different from sonnets like a haiku :) Hope you like it :)
PS: I'm not good at couting syllabs in english (or in poetry xD) so i may got it wrong, if i did tell me :)

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About your author's note, I too have trouble counting them. As for the haiku, nice poem I love that it is in Latin and what it means, thanks for the translation and meaning. Very nice lines in this, really nice, enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was actually nice...Keep writing!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was a great try!! keep it up!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May have missed a few syllables here and there. But the thought itself is stunning. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is unique


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it :) butterflies are my favorite so very good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Hahaha I love this!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

witty?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed the simplicity of this piece. It is a bit off if you're going for a haiku. Your first line is 4 syllables, 2nd is 5 syllables, and the last line is 5 also. But I like the general idea, and you're brave for trying! Molto bene!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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