first time trying something so different from sonnets like a haiku :) Hope you like it :)
PS: I'm not good at couting syllabs in english (or in poetry xD) so i may got it wrong, if i did tell me :)
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About your author's note, I too have trouble counting them. As for the haiku, nice poem I love that it is in Latin and what it means, thanks for the translation and meaning. Very nice lines in this, really nice, enjoyed.
I really enjoyed the simplicity of this piece. It is a bit off if you're going for a haiku. Your first line is 4 syllables, 2nd is 5 syllables, and the last line is 5 also. But I like the general idea, and you're brave for trying! Molto bene!
Why do I call myself 外人?
外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人.
We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds:
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