The 3rd H Riddle

Originally that has been thought as a homework assignment (for english class, check out note for reviewers), however, i ended up dedicating a lot of time to it and actually enjoyed it

Here we are, all together as we've never been before,

and there she is, among us, happy and smiling,

above those hills the dawn is rising

and I see the sunshines reflected in her eyes,

making them glow like diamonds of big size.

She is of beauty rich and rare,

of manners kind and fair,

to help she's always there,

as long as we all care.

She doesn't speak a lot

though her voice is sweet and soft,

she loves classical dance,

to become a ballerina, she fights for a chance,

if you're waiting for me to say her name,

let me tell you, I want from you the same,

so tell me who she is

or say goodbye and leave.

Author's Note

One day my english teacher came out with this:
Guys, for the next time I want you to write a poem using Chaucer style (used its rhyme scheme, ABBCCDD) talking about someone of the class, the description must be good because we're gonna try to guess who he/she is ! (3h in fact is my class, and riddle came out of the fact people have to guess it)

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like your descriptions in this poem through out each line. Nicely done.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

A very interesting read :-)

[kidd x]

very nicely done, enjoyed

[MandaBear]

very cool :) by the way who was the person you picked?? if you dont mind me asking of course

[T. Michele Smock]

cool

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The perfection of your style always impresses me, however it lacks a certain passion, just my opinion! x