Silent in the chaos

Done during a boring class at school.

Silent in the chaos, I'm standing;

amongst the screams and shouts of distant people

staying in this little room of walls, and knowledge, and human captivity

waiting for the bell to cry their freedom.

I don't care about it, since I'm lost in my thoughts;

surfing in the waves of my worries,

flying in the blue skies of my mind chasing for my biggest dreams.

' Shout in the silence, I want and need,

give my secrets away in this empty stage,

scream out my lungs in every single word

give no mercy to this unbreakable silence

Untill I find out,

just like I can't stop the sunset to arrive,

I can't either break the outside silence with my inside chaos.

Author's Note

About grammar:
I apologize if I made some grammar mistakes, English is a foreign language for me so I may make some mistakes you can find silly.
About that ' in the 3rd stanza it stands for "to", I know I had to put an infinitive (to shout) but I didn't like how that "to" sounded so I put the ' in its place.
I know I don't need to say and after a coma (,) but in this case I used it on purpose because it helps make the pause even longer (and that's what i was looking for)
If i made any other mistake, please tell me :)
Hope you liked the poem, I worked really hard on it :)

Reviews

[quinfinn]

when silence becomes chaos you must liberate your soul but, when chaos becomes silence you have touched purification and nirvana...to feel helpless to both is only human...

[外人 (Gaijin)]

So you also believe in Nirvana, other cool stuff I should know? xD

[koty bell]

the poem is excellent i can tell u worked hard on it great write man:))

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. When we want time to go faster. Time moved too slow and we can begin to think too much. I like this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It takes a stnace where others fail to follow, a well written piece, well done, good read.

[MandaBear]

Well i really like it :) And you can put my poem(used to be) on Facebook :) i hope you review more and write more so i can review yours :)