Airplane

Something in English, finally :)

Airplanes, rulers of the sky,

Come and rescue me,

May your sweet noise

Awake my will for speed !

Run, airplane, run and laugh

At sound for being too slow,

At people for staying down there.

Fly me away, over the Himalayas,

Surround my sight with clouds,

So that I can befriend them,

Bring me anywhere ... Everywhere,

From Canada to Chile, back and forth.

And once you get tired, land me 

in an aircraft carrier over the Indian Ocean.

Author's Note

A poem about something I love: airplanes =D
Wish you like it !

Reviews

[Jazique]

Awe person I thought we were on the same track after that matematicas poem but, not airplanes I don't do heights. I can say at least that I like your poem. No real issues with the poem grammatically and all. You really gave life to the airplanes and the people behind it. Well done. Reading this at school though so I can't say anything about the music that goes with the poem.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I have been on an airplane only one time in my life. I went to Florida to go to Disney World when I was a little bit younger. I was scared at first to ride the airplane but after we were off in the air, I was looking out of the window and smiling. I bet a lot of things have advanced on airplanes since I have been on there. There wasn't small tvs or anything but I know that they do now. Great write on an amazing invention! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Airplanes, rulers of the sky,

Come and rescue me,

May your sweet noise

Awake my will for speed !"

You rule and reign now in poetry. Excellent...:)....

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Really?! Wow, thank you very much, my friend !!! That's a very kind review ! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You have the talent...:)...............

[Coyote Poetry]

I use to like the airplane. Would be cool to fly a jet. Take perfect vision and great skill. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem. that made me think of all those families waiting in Malayasia for news of their relatives...
great poem from a poet of quality. (If I ever have some success as a poet, (( it might rain in hell !)) someone I would like to translate for me..)

[外人 (Gaijin)]

thank you very much !! :) So kind !

[Sami Khalil]

A unique write along with the subject...Bravo...............

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very cool poetry there buddy.This is very cute and in English no less lol