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Have no clue about the title, would you help me? Hope you like it :)

Derramam-se lagrimas nervosas

e queimam por contacto

minha histerica, asfixiada mao

que escreve, risca e rescreve

Versos mal escritos,

jamais ditos,

apenas pensados,

quebram a monotona realidade.

Mas estes sufocam no silencio,

estes sao substituidos

por versos de estatica beleza

e falsa filosofia.

Versos que agradam por falta de conteudo

e monofonia de discursos.

Relembram e cantam a artistica mentira

que conforta os bebados de metrica.

TRASLATION

Angry tears fall

and burn in touch

with my histeric breathless hand

that writes, erases and re-writes

Badly-written,

never-spoken,

just-thought verses

break this flat reality.

But these verses suffocate in the silence,

they are replaced

with verses of static beauty

and fake philosophy.

Verses that please for their lack of content,

and monophonic speeches.

They remember and sing the artistic lie

that consoles the metrics-drunken ones.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Many lines could be the title in the poem. Easy to be tricks. Hard to regain proper vision and goals. I enjoyed the strength of the strong statements in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thank you for reading, my friend ! And for such a kind review

[Mockingbird]

i like the way you use writing verses as an outpouring of emotions. excellent poem.

[Inda]

Amazing, read it in italian and understood most of it since i know spanish, bellisimo poema! ;)

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thank you :) it's portuguese, btw :)

[Inda]

Oh, welk that explains it! Lol

[Sami Khalil]

A marvelous bilingual poem and poet. Bravo

[Leslie Philibert]

A poet I admire a lot, this impresses me, poets who can write well ( as here ) in two languages are very talented..

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thank you very much, always so kind !

[外人 (Gaijin)]

I really appreciated it ;)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A product of excellence bravo!

[外人 (Gaijin)]

thank you very much, always so kind :)