Men's flirting

Finally I don't need to provide a translation =D I was starting to miss writing in my favourite language, English :)

Your teeth already taste her virgin blood,

your look, like a tyger's, no mercy shows,

your love becomes your prey in this aweful gloom,

poor soul, what's going to happen only God knows.

Violence and perversion fill the air around you,

shame on you, men ! You are no beast,

So why do you let such horrible desires control you?!

If that's your love, I prefer your hate, I take the risk.

How can lover's eyes be so hateful?

'Shamed I am, of my own sex for such behaviour,

No other flirt appeared to me so disgraceful.

'Prefer being single forever than sharing this behaviour.

Pure creature, escape to his evil possesion,

your beauty shall not be his secret obsession.

Author's Note

Came up with this after being disgusted by my friends' way of flirting, it looked to me so scaring I wanted to run away from them, if every men flirt that way (I fear so), I pity women :(

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this poem and the meaning you have written into it. I also really like how you wrote it like vampires. Though at the same time the message of the flirting isn't forgotten. Nice write indeed.
There are many ways to flirt, and not all ways are so... respectful as others.
I still like the old fashioned way of behavior where there are ladies and gentleman. Opening a door for a lady, pulling out a chair at a meal for a lady, the famous: ladies first gesture, etc. Sad that those manners seem to have gotten lost a lot in the world now, though there are still those good couple of gentleman to keep those respectful manners shining.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

I LOVE the old-fashioned way ... But it's like nobody uses it anymore :(

[icelandicblue]

This poem has strong teeth of its own. We are human, not animals, and I think your poem does a good job speaking to that.

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem, and I am with you, flirt with style, good manners, and respect !