Men's flirting

Finally I don't need to provide a translation =D I was starting to miss writing in my favourite language, English :)

Your teeth already taste her virgin blood,

your look, like a tyger's, no mercy shows,

your love becomes your prey in this aweful gloom,

poor soul, what's going to happen only God knows.

Violence and perversion fill the air around you,

shame on you, men ! You are no beast,

So why do you let such horrible desires control you?!

If that's your love, I prefer your hate, I take the risk.

How can lover's eyes be so hateful?

'Shamed I am, of my own sex for such behaviour,

No other flirt appeared to me so disgraceful.

'Prefer being single forever than sharing this behaviour.

Pure creature, escape to his evil possesion,

your beauty shall not be his secret obsession.

Author's Note

Came up with this after being disgusted by my friends' way of flirting, it looked to me so scaring I wanted to run away from them, if every men flirt that way (I fear so), I pity women :(

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this poem and the meaning you have written into it. I also really like how you wrote it like vampires. Though at the same time the message of the flirting isn't forgotten. Nice write indeed.
There are many ways to flirt, and not all ways are so... respectful as others.
I still like the old fashioned way of behavior where there are ladies and gentleman. Opening a door for a lady, pulling out a chair at a meal for a lady, the famous: ladies first gesture, etc. Sad that those manners seem to have gotten lost a lot in the world now, though there are still those good couple of gentleman to keep those respectful manners shining.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

I LOVE the old-fashioned way ... But it's like nobody uses it anymore :(

[Stormie Sky]

this poem is really good. I like it a lot :)

[Stormie Sky]

this poem is really good. I like it a lot :)

[Krista Weiss]

Oh my gosh! This is so great! :P Couldn't help cracking up laughing thinking of the creepy guys at my school that hit on me :P Amazing job! :)

[Writer #00]

(I) can't say I can relate to this in any way, but nice poem and I'm sure you gave a certain type of male a thing or twelve to think about upon the writing and sharing of this poem's message. I suppose there are males who have creepy ways of trying to approach the female gender...some of which may be classed as rapist/pedophiles/serial killers/homicidal maniacs...but there are some noble males who come across as completely awkward or gynophobic.

Well written, great rhyming.

[Mockingbird]

we, women, do not like like it when guys come on too strong. we find them to be arrogant and even condescending to think we would respond to that kind of behavior. personally i find it repulsive how men objectify women.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

agreed ! (and I'm a man)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Men are by their very nature are driven by that need to conquer, especially the sexual conquests they have or deem to have, well done, good read.

[MandaBear]

Very interesting poem =)

[Inda]

this is very poignant and i found it entertaining as well, a bit dark, but not so much that the message gets lost; great job!

[quinfinn]

sometimes the behavior of men in a flirtation makes me feel ashamed to belong to the gender...some of us can be so callous and crude. this piece shines a bright light onto the darkest part of man....and our amusing fumblings in social situations. well done!