Piove di giorno (translation below)

Just a little haiku I came up with ... guess where ! At school :(

Piove di giorno:

tristemente asciutto

sono a scuola.

TRANSLATION: It rains on day-time

It rains during daytime:

Unhappily dry

I am at school.

Reviews

[Writer #00]

Daydreamers. One day we will rule the world...in our heads. Is this a literal translation? Because "it rains on daytime" might not be what you are trying to say, do you mean it rains DURING daytime, as in during the day? Short and sweet. : )

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Yep ! Sorry for my english, correcting right now :)

[Writer #00]

No problem!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, a touching sentiment.

[icelandicblue]

LOL- watching with longing out of the window. I hope that you get a dynamic teacher and soon!

[外人 (Gaijin)]

so do I !! Guess I will be bored by school 'till I get to college, though :(

[icelandicblue]

I am so sorry- a good teacher can change your life!

[Jazique]

"Ain't that the truth"
Anyways well done

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

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Lol great work

Sono felice di essere qui, e di leggere le tue parole, grazie amico.
"Quando il piove c'è, siamo sempre contenta di essere dentro la scuola"

- Elisa

[Epipsychologist]

It sounds pretty in the other language. Is that Italian or Portuguese?

[外人 (Gaijin)]

thank you very much :) It's italian =D

[Krista Weiss]

Hahahaha great poem!! :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh the humor and drag of being at school and yet... some really good writes come from being at school. Very nice Haiku.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

ahahahah, yeah, all my sadness come out from those 4 walls