Nature (translation below)

Not so sure about this poem, feel free to help me out with this (title included) :) Bad translation (this one was difficult to translate)

Vi è forse canzone che riesci a ricordare

che possa superare il calmo suono del mare?

E quale poesia, opera o umano componimento

puo competere col canto mattutino di un uccellino?

Indicami un grattacielo, ammasso di cemento artificiale,

più imponente di una selvaggia cascata, opera naturale.

Quale arte, quale quadro di Monet, Manet o Degas

puo competere col chiaro rossore dell'alba?

Ogni giorno, dono divino, il sole ci bacia,

il vento impetuoso, amichevolmente ci abbraccia,

sensazioni naturali che nessun aggeggio puo dare.

Uomo, non distruggere cio che non sai replicare!

Quanto è insignificante la tua creazione,

quindi invidi la natura e le porti distruzione. 

TRANSLATION

Is there a song you can remember

that can outstage the calm sound of the sea?

And what poem, piece or human writing

can compete with the morning singing of a bird?

Point me a skyscrapper, accumulation of artificial concrete,

more stately than a wild waterfall, a natural thing.

What art, what picture of Manet, Monet or Degas

can compete with the clear redness of the dawn?

Everyday. a God's gift, sun kisses us,

wind strongly, friendly hugs us,

natural sensations that no machine can give.

Man, don't destroy what you can't recreate.

How insignificant your creation is,

so you envy Nature and bring it destruction.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh wow. The beauty of this poem... the message in the poem... it's just so wonderfully beautiful. I love thought you have in this poem. The way you compare things is really nice in this poem. I love this, not sure what to choose as my favorite part/lines.
Though I must say this part right here is really something:
"natural sensations that no machine can give.
Man, don't destroy what you can't recreate."
So true.
The first two stanzas... just... so lovely. Love them.
A bit speechless here with the way of thought in this write of yours. As well as the message. There is so much that nature has to offer us all. And so many are blind to see it. Just like the way of the comparisons and questions you wrote in those first two stanzas.
Beautiful poem. Love it a lot.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thank you very much =D !! Glad you liked it !

[Devanshu Rajput]

you have a writing bug in you that results in this great piece.....keep writing...a excellent nature write....

[Devanshu Rajput]

thanks for sharing the video....was hoping that i would be there

[外人 (Gaijin)]

thanks =D IS the writing bug something positive?

[Devanshu Rajput]

yes! my friend....welcome

[外人 (Gaijin)]

=D yeah !! Thx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A trusted guide if ever there was, a pleasant read that reads quite well.

[Britt]

I enjoy your writings. You're a very good writer. Nice job!

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Really? *___* Thank you very much ! :)

[Britt]

Yes. :) You are one of my favorite writers! i hope you get published. :P

[外人 (Gaijin)]

thank you VERY much !! =D

[Britt]

You're welcome. :D

[Buniheart]

I really really love the naturisitc point of view your poem has! Nature is beautiful. Wait, its more than that - its a masterpiece. Thanks for highlighting that in your poem

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Great poem!! Love it! :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Oh wow. You couldn't have spoken more deeper truth that if you tried. This is so powerful and so beautiful a message and especially for our times today. Thanks for sharing.

[Leslie Philibert]

Really great poem, with loads of great lines, really like the first couplet. Very good.

[MandaBear]

This is a lovely poem. Great imagery.Great job.

[Mockingbird]

this is a lovely poem. great imagery. each line is thought-provoking. great job.