"Write, because words are very powerful,
write, because words can do everything.
What you write today
can change the world tomorrow."
I agree with the logic of the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Word can do everything, but express themselves without themselves. A look, a sigh, the sharp intake of breath, the open mouth gaze of wonder... these express without words. All in all a lovely piece; a nice mixture of subjunctive and imperative; an achievement of learning.
Very cool. I loved the message of the poem, and I think it's fantastic that you're trying to learn another language.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Take off that "you're trying" ahahah
They force me to study Latin :( The only language I don't.. read moreTake off that "you're trying" ahahah
They force me to study Latin :( The only language I don't like :(
Hi I like this. I have two recommendations. They are small. Remove very before powerful; just have it read, "Write, because words are powerful:- the very is unnecessary because words are inherently powerful. I would also remove the can in front of "do everything," and have the line read "Write, because words do everything." The images are have greater impact if they are not qualified. j'aime toutes les langues!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Hi ! Thanks :) Well, actually, believe it or not, both things you've point out are "mistranslation",.. read moreHi ! Thanks :) Well, actually, believe it or not, both things you've point out are "mistranslation", the first one was a superlative, since I didn't know how to translate it in english, I used the word "very" before the adjective, the second thing was more like "write, because words can everything", I added the verb "do" because it sounded weird in English (at least, that's what I thought)
oui, nous devons ecrire parce que façon pour immortaliser notre pensées...:) est ma francais grammaire corriger?
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
grammaire française :)
La grammaire de ton français est surement meilleur que la grammaire d.. read moregrammaire française :)
La grammaire de ton français est surement meilleur que la grammaire de mon latin ahahah
Why do I call myself 外人?
外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人.
We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds:
The wor.. more..