Riddle O

Guessings and comments are welcome :)

She's always by your side,

always with you in this fight,

no matter what you do, 

she will always stand by you,

everybody can forsake you, hate you,

but she'll always be there, help you,

she's an angel from heaven

disappoint you, she'll never.

A helping hand you can always count on,

the greatest friend you can trust on.

My deepest secrets , to her, i have told

for she'll keep and protect them as if made of gold,

my mind and my heart she knows better than me,

no need to talk, a look and she knows what I mean,

in this world no one really gets me

but she, alone, understands me,

I'm an open book to her, page by page,

she can read it if she wants, for once I'm not afraid,

she lights up my world by simply existing,

without her, something'd be missing.

I love her as I've never loved somebody,

'till we live, she will always be my buddy,

we are linked by the strongest bond of all,

in our veins, the same blood does flow,

In her friendship I can count for sure.

Author's Note

After three tries that's the best I could get, I'm not happy at all, what do you think? Should I delete it?
As always, 10 guessings and I'll tell the answer

Reviews

[quinfinn]

no, don't delete it. adjust your rhyme scheme, work on smoothing the flow some.
think and rethink outside of the box...for example try "my deepest secrets , to her, i have told....for she'll keep and protect them as if made of gold" just a quickly thought out rhyme scheme. this poem has so much potential, work with it...play with it, take a break and get back to it...remember, there is no deadline on talent, nurture and groom it until you are satisfied. great start!!!

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Thx, thx, thx, THANKS !! That's exactly the kind of review I was needing :) Your idea was amazing, already changed the verses ;) Gonna follow your advice, now I take a break from this, then I'll come back :)

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Really good job!!! This riddle's pretty easy unless I'm just thinking wrong :P haha anyways its really nice! :) < 3