Summer holiday
A Poem by
外人 (Gaijin)
Came naturally to my mind, hope you like it :)
Summer holidays:
amoung songs and poems I
spent sixty sunsets.
© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)
Reviews
Fine write,and it proves you don`t need to a lot of words to impress.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very visual. i wish my summers were like that. excellent poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
very visual. i wish my summers were like that. excellent poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
short and hppy ,lol
Posted 12 Years Ago
short and hppy ,lol
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice :) i love it
Posted 12 Years Ago
nice :) i love it
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
too few words for such an overwhelming experience .....
but nice :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
too few words for such an overwhelming experience .....
but nice :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
lovely
Posted 12 Years Ago
lovely
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
So true. You really came through with such a short, but powerful poem! Great work!
Posted 12 Years Ago
So true. You really came through with such a short, but powerful poem! Great work!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Really cute!! Love it!! < 3
Posted 12 Years Ago
Really cute!! Love it!! < 3
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
beautiful and a little playful... well done
Posted 12 Years Ago
beautiful and a little playful... well done
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Short and to the point, yet painted such a colorful splendor. Way to go!
Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah
Posted 12 Years Ago
Short and to the point, yet painted such a colorful splendor. Way to go!
Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 9, 2012
Last Updated on September 9, 2012
Tags:
Haiku ,
Poetry
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外人 (Gaijin) London, United Kingdom
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Why do I call myself 外人?
外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人.
We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds:
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