Summer holiday
A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
 Came naturally to my mind, hope you like it :) 
Summer holidays: amoung songs and poems I spent sixty sunsets.
© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)
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Fine write,and it proves you don`t need to a lot of words to impress.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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very visual. i wish my summers were like that. excellent poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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short and hppy ,lol
Posted 12 Years Ago
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nice :) i love it
Posted 12 Years Ago
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too few words for such an overwhelming experience .....
but nice :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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lovely
Posted 12 Years Ago
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So true. You really came through with such a short, but powerful poem! Great work!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Really cute!! Love it!! < 3
Posted 12 Years Ago
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beautiful and a little playful... well done
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Short and to the point, yet painted such a colorful splendor. Way to go!
Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on September 9, 2012
Last Updated on September 9, 2012
Tags: Haiku, Poetry
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外人 (Gaijin)London, United Kingdom
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Why do I call myself 外人?
外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人.
We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds:
The wor.. more..
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