Summer holiday

Summer holiday

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Came naturally to my mind, hope you like it :)

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Summer holidays:
amoung songs and poems I
spent sixty sunsets.

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


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a good and perfectly done haiku

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Devanshu Rajput

11 Years Ago

welcome
Devanshu Rajput

11 Years Ago

welcome
I really like that last line. good poem thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Love it especially the last line that just fills the whole poem with such a great beautiful ending. :) Nice. Simple.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love this Haiku, it is beautiful. Though I can never writing them myself. I feel like I cannot get my thought out in three lines. It makes true talent. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Summer! And now some have school...
Great poem! The flow and rhytm went greatly even though it was a little short. 100/100 :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Summer is for the young in heart and in mind. I enjoyed the poem. Short and told a complete story. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
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Beautiful imagery

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Vivid write.

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Added on September 9, 2012
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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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