Summer holiday
A Poem by
外人 (Gaijin)
Came naturally to my mind, hope you like it :)
Summer holidays:
amoung songs and poems I
spent sixty sunsets.
© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)
Reviews
a good and perfectly done haiku
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I really like that last line. good poem thanks for sharing :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I really like that last line. good poem thanks for sharing :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Love it especially the last line that just fills the whole poem with such a great beautiful ending. :) Nice. Simple.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Love it especially the last line that just fills the whole poem with such a great beautiful ending. :) Nice. Simple.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love this Haiku, it is beautiful. Though I can never writing them myself. I feel like I cannot get my thought out in three lines. It makes true talent. Nice job.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love this Haiku, it is beautiful. Though I can never writing them myself. I feel like I cannot get my thought out in three lines. It makes true talent. Nice job.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Summer! And now some have school...
Great poem! The flow and rhytm went greatly even though it was a little short. 100/100 :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
Summer! And now some have school...
Great poem! The flow and rhytm went greatly even though it was a little short. 100/100 :D
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Summer is for the young in heart and in mind. I enjoyed the poem. Short and told a complete story. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
Summer is for the young in heart and in mind. I enjoyed the poem. Short and told a complete story. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful imagery
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beautiful imagery
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Vivid write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Vivid write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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外人 (Gaijin) London, United Kingdom
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Why do I call myself 外人?
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