Lisboa (translation below)

Coming back home, had the amazing pleasure of watching from above the city of Lisbon at night and the capital of the "old empire" (talking about the Portuguese one) inspired me this :)

Lisboa, ouro

artificial contra a 

noite mais negra.

 

Translation:

Lisbon, artificial

gold against the

darkest night.

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Short and sweet. delightful

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Sounds really pretty, nice imagery and nice inspiration.

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I'm glad I'm not the only one who speaks Portugeese here! Loved it! 100/100

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Muito obrigado :) Desculpa a curiosidade mas fui olhar no teu perfil ... voce fala realmente todas aquelas linguas?! Wow ! Ah, e gostei de saber que uma portuguesa de lisboa gostou do meu poema sobre lisboa kkk, è o melhor resultado que podia pensar de obter kkk.

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sim eu falo todas aqueles linguas. De nada! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Good visions create by your words. I like the chance to read the poem in two languages. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Short and sweet. Beautiful imagery.

[eglantine]

hmmm, lots of haiku's lately, not just you either. As always, wish I could hear this read in it's original, untranslated form.

[Destinyxi]

Thanks for the translation haha, lovely written!

[Leslie Philibert]

Fantastic - I`ve been there and I loved it, Portugal is fantastic, the poem a cracker.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very pretty and almost surreal

[Talismanic]

This gives the same feeling as seeing in real life...prEtty:)
When above a city, god's-eye-view, we can feel removed from mankind's grind of the world but somehow closer to its heart.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Couldn't agree more !!