Riddle N

Riddle N

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I live in the petals of a rose,
in the mane of a horse,
I'm the reason why girls wear high-heels,
and fat boys go for light meals.

If Beauty were light, I'd be her shadow,
when I walk in, my admirers' minds I blow,
no person escapes completely from my spell,
every heart for me at least once fell.

Sometimes I bring perfection,
sometimes just depression,
I can be your body's best friend
or its worst enemy 'till its end.

Now it's your turn,
tell me my name or never return !

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Sorry guys for not posting riddles for all this time, I had serious writer's block with this riddle ahahah
The answer is ... Vanity.

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how ironic i just posted a who am i poem please read and tell me if u get it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

I'm reading it now =D
nector


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

Nope :P
Hmmmm, cryptic, lol I would say you're the beast? in good and bad? and she's the beauty? Ironicly beautiful then :D

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aianarie (INACTIVE)

12 Years Ago

Was mine right??

12 Years Ago

Yes, i posted then thought lol, maybe he was so drunk he was in an vegas coma... lol yep private me,.. read more

12 Years Ago

Are you "Jealousy"?
Is it fat? Or pollun?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

Nope, sorry
Aly Jones

12 Years Ago

Drat. XD
I hate that I don't know the answer to this riddle. :( Haha!!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

Nothing at all is coming to my mind! D: Oh no!! Haha.
外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

Want the answer? (of course, I'd send it to you in private mail)
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

Yeah sure :) haha

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Added on August 29, 2012
Last Updated on August 30, 2012
Tags: Poetry, Riddle, Poem, Sonnet, Rhyme scheme

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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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