Riddle N

Riddle N

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I live in the petals of a rose,
in the mane of a horse,
I'm the reason why girls wear high-heels,
and fat boys go for light meals.

If Beauty were light, I'd be her shadow,
when I walk in, my admirers' minds I blow,
no person escapes completely from my spell,
every heart for me at least once fell.

Sometimes I bring perfection,
sometimes just depression,
I can be your body's best friend
or its worst enemy 'till its end.

Now it's your turn,
tell me my name or never return !

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Sorry guys for not posting riddles for all this time, I had serious writer's block with this riddle ahahah
The answer is ... Vanity.

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sooo neat!! =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really good one. I have been reading all the different responses and I am stumped


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Meth. No that can't be it. How bout crack. No not that. How bout estrogen?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

estrogen?! o.O Should it make fat boys go for light meals?! xD
Nope
style?

very well written
ive always sucked at riddles ;/

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

nope, sorry :(
wow, what is your name? great poem
but i guess your name is FASHION

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

Have I offended you somehow, my friend? I know the answer, I've sent it to you through private messa.. read more
axel

12 Years Ago

ok, va bene fratello,its your riddle and your answer is quite good
外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

Liked the "va bene fratello" xD Very Italian :)
I love the line "If Beauty were light, I'd be her shadow,". That is quite lovely.

Hmm, this is a tough one! I suppose I will try and guess. :-) I'm thinking pride.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

nope, you're thinking of two people, one feeling attraction for another, think of something that can.. read more
Aianarie (INACTIVE)

12 Years Ago

Well then, I commend you. It takes a lot to stump me!
Aianarie (INACTIVE)

12 Years Ago

Style?
I think its Dew or Sweat?? I hope that's right! if not i gave it a good try! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol maybe.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

still not ! :P
smell!!!!!!!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its totally the nectar in a flower...maybe rain drops off a flow pedal?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

Do girls wear high-hills for that?! Didn't know it xD
layla

12 Years Ago

hahaha ok ok
layla

12 Years Ago

im a selective reader

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Added on August 29, 2012
Last Updated on August 30, 2012
Tags: Poetry, Riddle, Poem, Sonnet, Rhyme scheme

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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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Why do I call myself 外人? 外人 is a foreigner, an outsider, therefore we're all, no matter what, 外人. We all live as foreigners in-between two worlds: The wor.. more..

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