Riddle N

Riddle N

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Opinions and answers are welcome :)

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I live in the petals of a rose,
in the mane of a horse,
I'm the reason why girls wear high-heels,
and fat boys go for light meals.

If Beauty were light, I'd be her shadow,
when I walk in, my admirers' minds I blow,
no person escapes completely from my spell,
every heart for me at least once fell.

Sometimes I bring perfection,
sometimes just depression,
I can be your body's best friend
or its worst enemy 'till its end.

Now it's your turn,
tell me my name or never return !

© 2012 外人 (Gaijin)


Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Sorry guys for not posting riddles for all this time, I had serious writer's block with this riddle ahahah
The answer is ... Vanity.

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Well I did not guess that lol. Very good riddle. :D You may have had writer's block but you puzzled me on this riddle because it is that good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great piece. You presented "vanity" well in this poetic riddle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohh my gosh I always stink at these riddles! Haha :) Good job though!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's true that sometimes it could be your depression. there's so many influences out there that people always need to keep up with. great riddle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written riddle. I like a brain-teaser every once in a while. Perfection.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol "high-hills" did ya mean "high-heels"???

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

ahahah, sorry, my bad xD Correcting it right now ! :)
Good riddle ..but I haven't no clue on this one .. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good riddle. I'm poor at riddles. I will wait for the answer. Thank you for your thoughts and testing us poor old minds.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A clothes horse otherwise known as a model lovely write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

12 Years Ago

nope xD

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Added on August 29, 2012
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Tags: Poetry, Riddle, Poem, Sonnet, Rhyme scheme

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外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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