Luci notturne (translation below)

Thought this on my way back to Rome (watching outside the window of the plane coming back from Paris)

Luci notturne:

Velo di raffinata

seta su Roma.

TRANSLATION

Night lights:

Refined veil of

silk upon Rome.

Author's Note

Opinions are welcome :)

Reviews

[BLBrown]

I am planning my first trip to Rome and Florence. Have been to Paris twice. I love the thought here. The lights on the Champs de Elysee remind me of this...a sort of nighl fine silk. So excited to go to Rome...I'm a HUGE Michelangelo fan, hence Florence as well.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This sounds so pretty. Captured imagery.

[MandaBear]

I want to visit Rome so bad! You make Rome come alive. One day I will get there!

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Paris and London are better xD Personal opinion, of course ;)

[MandaBear]

Lol Anywhere is better! lol

[MOON]

Lovely write you painted image well coming in to land cities always look beautiful lit up.

[eglantine]

oooo, I love this. Very sensuous and smooth

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo of the city and amazing words to describe the night lights over the city. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaijin)]

The photo is about a random city, took it from google xD
But thank you very much for your kind review :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Great !

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Higly picturesque, a positive and gelding piece.

[Laura Maidah]

Beautiful. So glad It's translated.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I like it. Short and sweet- just enough to get your point across. Great job!