It could, but for a while

They said ' money can't buy happiness'
To me those were just but vain babblings of broke old b******s
I could get anything I wanted in a minute or less
Indeed, my company was comprised only of prominent men and masters
I had become allergic to losers, I rolled with the best
In my case money could buy happiness

It all happened too fast, out of thin air dark clouds gathered
All of a sudden my loved ones and so called friends left
My kingdom was falling, the once green leaves had withered
I was left in solitude as I lamented and wept
All those hours I put in, how hard I laboured
All of it, all of them, all of me, by the winds of change was swept
That's when I realised, money could buy happiness.....but for a while

Author's Note

Enjoy and feel free to criticize

Reviews

[Makenna]

That's a powerful picture you have painted for us. I enjoyed reading it, but I feel that better flow and word choice would help empower your writing more. You have lots of raw potential, though.

[Dominic Shaya]

Thanx makenna :-)

[Karen Elizabeth miller]

I really liked this poem and how you express your feelings

[Dominic Shaya]

Thanx for the rviews guys u rok

[Dominic Shaya]

Thanx for the reviews guys.u rock

[baby butter]

i felt like it could use more soul but it was a great piece in terms of content. keep writing good job. and make sure to review mine too thanks

[Scott Mou]

Very nice poem. Very nice indeed

Keep up The good Work