Right
A Poem by Dominic
The game of what is Right.
Eat Right Think Right Do Right Be Right Stack your chips Play your hand Win or Lose?
© 2020 Dominic
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If you had left the question mark off the last line, I could see a sound philosophical thread running through the poem. It seems ambiguous as it is, so I assume there is some deeper meaning than what I have discerned,
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Thank you I appreciate your review. I thought of removing the question mark as well. The reason I ke.. read moreThank you I appreciate your review. I thought of removing the question mark as well. The reason I kept it in was that I was going for the idea that it's all a question. You can do all the right things and still lose, and also sometimes by not doing whats perceived as 'right' you can win. And this is essentially asking why that is the case.
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Added on August 2, 2020
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