Through My Tear-Filled Eyes

Your tears fall soft and silent as the drifting snow,

Mine are close to follow.

Your heart breaks from pain and loss,

But mine is just as hollow.

You think I have moved on, forgotten,

But trust me, that’s not true.

You think about me every day,

Just as I think of you.

Events of the past left holes in your heart,

You think I am to blame.

You don’t understand I’m hurting too,

Our pain is just the same.

I've never stopped loving you,

Through all the hurt and lies,

I wish you could see all of this,

Through my tear-filled eyes.

 

Author's Note

Thank you guys for your continual support of my writing! I was hoping if I could ask you to extend some of that support to my friend Let The Mind Be Free. Her writing is really amazing, but she isn't getting the recognition she deserves. Thanks!

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

That has got to be the most unbiased, two-sides-of-the-coin, poem I have ever read about love and love's loss. There are no winners and no one is entirely solely to blame. I just hope for the persons involved that have inspired this poem, for them to find their way back into what should have been a perfect love. Maybe it still will be.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

aww that's sweet and heart breaking at the same time. Very beautiful.

Great Job

[Zachary_James]

Stunning. I love this, the usage of the words are just amazing.
Well done

[Kiara]

This is so beautiful, I absolutely love it.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow so beautiful it really touched my heart.

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

Wow. This is so beautiful, in a sad, heartbreaking way. I could really feel it. No grammar mistakes that I caught either. Kudos!

[Satan's Daughter]

Wow. I can really feel your pain. I have never read a poem about a guy's pain. It's a nice change and I really think your poem is beautiful. It's also impressive how you could come off hurt but, at the same time, still in love with the one that did this to you. Great work :)

[Darkening Shadow]

This is great! So deep!
Great Write!!