Through My Tear-Filled Eyes

Your tears fall soft and silent as the drifting snow,

Mine are close to follow.

Your heart breaks from pain and loss,

But mine is just as hollow.

You think I have moved on, forgotten,

But trust me, that’s not true.

You think about me every day,

Just as I think of you.

Events of the past left holes in your heart,

You think I am to blame.

You don’t understand I’m hurting too,

Our pain is just the same.

I've never stopped loving you,

Through all the hurt and lies,

I wish you could see all of this,

Through my tear-filled eyes.

 

Author's Note

Thank you guys for your continual support of my writing! I was hoping if I could ask you to extend some of that support to my friend Let The Mind Be Free. Her writing is really amazing, but she isn't getting the recognition she deserves. Thanks!

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

That has got to be the most unbiased, two-sides-of-the-coin, poem I have ever read about love and love's loss. There are no winners and no one is entirely solely to blame. I just hope for the persons involved that have inspired this poem, for them to find their way back into what should have been a perfect love. Maybe it still will be.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful message, rhyme and meter.......enjoyed this.

[Silhouette]

Wow, I am rendered speechless. Full of sorrow, pain, and is incredibly heartfelt and relatable. I love it, keep on writing!!

[Annabelle Lee]

You think I have moved on, forgotten,
But trust me, that's not true.
You think about me every day,
Just as I think of you

If you were to tell her that and she didn't want you back, girl's got issues. That's really probably all she wants to hear.

This was an AMAZING poem, the rhymes were clever and so well composed. This was wonderfully structured and magnificently presented.

Nice work!

[GemmaMarieLeask]

This poem is very deep. I can tell you're a very kind sweet hearted boy. And I look forward to reading some more of your writtings. :)

[nostal]

Poem might have been good. Too bad I couldn't get past the font.

[Toni]

This is great. It's vulnerability makes it very personal. I enjoyed reading it. Whoever it may be you were writing about, if it even is, there is always someone else c:
xoxo

[Icelanna]

Beautifully poetic and heartfelt x