Through My Tear-Filled Eyes

Your tears fall soft and silent as the drifting snow,

Mine are close to follow.

Your heart breaks from pain and loss,

But mine is just as hollow.

You think I have moved on, forgotten,

But trust me, that’s not true.

You think about me every day,

Just as I think of you.

Events of the past left holes in your heart,

You think I am to blame.

You don’t understand I’m hurting too,

Our pain is just the same.

I've never stopped loving you,

Through all the hurt and lies,

I wish you could see all of this,

Through my tear-filled eyes.

 

Author's Note

Thank you guys for your continual support of my writing! I was hoping if I could ask you to extend some of that support to my friend Let The Mind Be Free. Her writing is really amazing, but she isn't getting the recognition she deserves. Thanks!

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

That has got to be the most unbiased, two-sides-of-the-coin, poem I have ever read about love and love's loss. There are no winners and no one is entirely solely to blame. I just hope for the persons involved that have inspired this poem, for them to find their way back into what should have been a perfect love. Maybe it still will be.

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

very nice poem great flow and emotions I can tell that you really like this persone and care great jo

[Graveyardfuck]

I can realte to this...

[SyberRose]

Very touching poem...Nicely done...SyberRose

[hayley]

Wow that’s so good you’re an amazing writer/poet

[Perfect Mistake]

Awe this poem was cute and romantic. Made me smile. Well written also, good work on this sir :)

[Lina Grey]

beautiful message, honest and unbiased. the rhyme and meter are good and I only found one mistake: "You don’t understand I’m hurting to(o)" all in all, an excellent write hun. love it.

[Lexi]

OMG, this is really good. I love the way you expressed the pain they share, and it is really intense. Love it.

[CDseader]

Wow I'm in love with this writing!