All Wrong

All Wrong

A Poem by Brittany

When are you going to realize the timing was just wrong ?
Everything was beautiful but we didn' t belong..
We weren't meant to be..
We were too focused on what tomorrow held
And didn' t live in what out hearts felt in the moment..


We were exploding, running wild
But everything was so cold and mild. .
The truth never semed to be discovered ..
Faster and faster our life went and the more we kept on trying to believe..trying to not crumble
But you were lying and I was constantly in a tumble..


Nothing use to matter, it was just you and me..
Two conflicted hearts on fire for something that didn' t seem to be there
We were so unloved we forgot how to care. .
We forgot how to know. .
When are you going to realize the timing was wrong ?
I'm leaving my love, i'm gone. .
It was just wrong ...
And it will never be right ..
Everything was beautiful but we didn' t belong..

© 2009 Brittany


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Very interesting, well written, and wonderful piece. The sentiment was well expressed. Excellent job!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Brittany
Brittany

Carlsbad, CA



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I'm a 14 year old girl who has a passion for writing. My dream is to work in the music business and become a lyricist and work for a record company. Until then though, I must live my life and search f.. more..

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