Slow dance

decided to try something new

I can feel his arms around my waist

His breath is hot on my face

I wan't to kiss him, such romance

But there is a teacher so we will just slow dance

Author's Note

whenever i get reveiws they tell me what i am doing right... iI need people to tell me how i can be better

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

I think this is perfect just the way it is.......Whisk

[Michael G.]

Short, sweet, to the point.
Enjoyable read. This is totally understandable... even from the teacher's point of view.

Author's note: Write? right! People not eople. Simple mistakes takes away from a good poem. If it was worth writing, then do it as correctly as you know how.

[Brittany]

Wow! That is really good!