Hate Every Day

This is just a rough time for me and the only way i can imagine getting my feelings out there is by writing, enjoy

If life is not the number of breaths you take, then why breath at all

If love hurts, why bother to fall

The human being is somewhat slow

To believe in such things as love and hope

Yet, I admire the ones who seem so in the dark

I envy their ability to think with their heart

I look around and all I see

Are happy people looking back at me

What I wouldn't give, just for a blink

To be so stupid and not have to think

But I guess its better me than they

To be so critical and hate every day

Reviews

[Pax]

that's really a profound matter to think of... i see your critical in your way of thinking.. being in love might be stupid at times but it has a positive sides of it... being hopeful is human nature... we believed of something that is not there yet... you dont have to envy people that think with their heart because you already do... you just have to listen to yourself, listen to your soul-searching self...
great write my friend...I admire your works...

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

Great poem. A lot of feeling went into it

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.