School

School

A Poem by Annabelle Lee

Desks stacked on either side of the hallway
The gym smells of a fresh layer of wax and wet paint
Most lights are off, a few dead crickets in the hall
This doesn't seem like school at all
If I close my eyes I can remember
Coming to school in sweatpants and UGGs last December
I can remember walking down the hallway with my friends
And waiting on our nine month sentence to end
Missing the eighth graders I used to cheer with
Randomly calling them up just to throw a fit
"High School is so haaard"
Surprised I made it this far
In a month it all starts again
And I can see all my old friends 
And the new ones that I've made this summer
Hoping sophomore year is funner
No enemies this year, now I've settled all my beefs
Don't wanna have anyone mad at me
Ready to open my new locker in the old hallway
Head to the field smelling like grass and spray paint
All the lights will be on and my friends in the hall
Is it bad to say I can't wait for this fall?

© 2013 Annabelle Lee


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I hated school. I envy you Annabelle.
There are so many 'stand out tracks' on this poetic album -
I especially liked the use of poetic license in "Hoping sophomore year is funner"
And the amazing metaphor here "Ready to open my new locker in the old hallway"
A sure-fire number 1
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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you, Anto!



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I loved school and the crispness of the air, new notebooks and possibilities. If anyone is ready you are.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you.
School sucks. This doesn't. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you.
High school. I'm still having flash backs

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

Wedgies, Baby R? lol
The character in the poem is trying to compare the beginning of High School to three months of the season Fall, September when school starts, Applause, Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
I hated school. I envy you Annabelle.
There are so many 'stand out tracks' on this poetic album -
I especially liked the use of poetic license in "Hoping sophomore year is funner"
And the amazing metaphor here "Ready to open my new locker in the old hallway"
A sure-fire number 1
X

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you, Anto!
I loved school too, Annabelle. Lovely write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you.
Really cool poem I know the feeling lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you.

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Hello everyone I am Annabelle Lee. I am FINALLY, after June 12, the ripe old age of fifteen. I'm a poet. I want to write novels, as well, but those do not belong on this site in hopes that someday .. more..

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A Poem by Annabelle Lee