Just a dream rewrite

I was tryna please you

And forgot about me

But looking at us

Anyone could see

What we had was nice

But it was only just a dream

I followed you down this road

But I gotta go back

Cuz you already know

Time for us to realize

It was only just a dream

I finally go the the spot

But now I don't want it

Because I forgot

I don't know how to stop it

I hope now that you can't take it

After you find out you lost your baby

Now you ain't around

All I can do is think

I never pick it up

When the cell phone rings

Cuz i never deleted you like I always said I would

I try to pick it up

But I never thought I could

You were my life

I know it's not right

I left you, I tried

Cuz I know that you're not worth the fight

I was tryna please you

And forgot about me

But looking at us

Anyone could see

What we had was nice

But it was only just a dream

I followed you down this road

But I gotta go back

Cuz you already know

Time for us to realize

It was only just a dream

When I be writin, man I hear your voice in every word

Tryna get my poet on but I poet on but I can't let it hurt

And I just hope you know you're the only one I learned from

More and more I miss ya I swore I'd never yearn

He wouldn't give me all his love I wish he feels that payback

And he's sittin round the club thinkin all about his baby

I know I aint easy to love

But a little effort would be enough

And now I just can't take it every time that I'm alone

I bet he's wishin, hopin I'd pick up the phone

But I'm tryin so hard to move on

I know I'm wrong

I was tryna please you

And forgot about me

But looking at us

Anyone could see

What we had was nice

But it was only just a dream

I followed you down this road

But I gotta go back

Cuz you already know

Time for us to realize

It was only just a dream

you ever ashamed of somebody put your hands up (x2)

Then they gone and you wishin you could take back everything

(x2)

I was tryna please you

And forgot about me

But looking at us

Anyone could see

What we had was nice

But it was only just a dream

I followed you down this road

But I gotta go back

Cuz you already know

Time for us to realize

It was only just a dream

Author's Note

forget about the link in the poem....... either WC or I are having difficulties

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

ugggghhhhh I give up, enjoy.

[Annabelle Lee]

I realize I just reviewed my own piece, vain, I know

[Pryde Foltz]

lol..........But it had a lovely real-life feel and I could almost hear the music.