Obama

Obama

A Poem by Annabelle Lee

Did Extemporaneous in forensics today
First time, didn't exactly go my way
All my draws of the political type
I've never been into the Washington hype
In speaking on the Fiscal Cliff, Borrowing limits, and gun rights
I realized just how much Washington affected my life
I myself, had tried to take part
But all this talking really took to my heart
Got to talk all day long
About what the president is doing wrong
Some judges hit me for not using his title
As important as he is to me, might as well be Fifle
He doesn't deserve to be called "President"
I will use his title when I feel he deserves it
But he's done us no good, just broken promises again
Blaming it on congress for not giving him his "Grand Bargain"
Wants to steal from the rich and give to the poor
Robin Hood isn't so cool anymore
Take money from the people who work for it,
Give to the people who don't
Who in their right mind will support that?
Man, I surely won't
Next, a gun rights' bill
Laws won't make people not want to kill
Taking away our guns won't end our bouts
People can use anything to take other people out.
Washington has no idea what's going on out here. 
Which is why we change the head every four years

© 2013 Annabelle Lee


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Ahh. The horribly uncomfortable topic of politics.
Yeah, the well fair system is jacked up, but there are some people who actually DO need it. So, instead of totally giving up on it totally, maybe set better guide lines for who can use it.
I do agree on the right to bare arms, though. Who's to say that someone just can't get a gun illegally? Happens all the time, a law won't stop that.
I love Obama. I support gay rights, and I'm happy that they are getting a chance to marry.
Still, you can't possibly say that he was the worst. There is always Bush... -.-
We would be A LOT worse off if Mitt Romney was president... He was an idiot. XD

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

everyone has a right to their opinions



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You've expressed some very interesting thoughts here, and I really enjoy watching you reach and stretch and try your hand at more profound and mature subject matter. Never stop speaking your mind or voicing your thoughts and concerns. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

Don't plan on it, thanke
Annabelle, This is a finely crafted poem. I lived in Washington for twenty years and I don't express my political opinions but you really hit the nail on the head with this. I noticed in the last line you said, "we change the head every four years." however Obama did win reelection. (Sigh) You may want to rework that line. JMO. Keep up the good work. Eileen

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you.
There are many super rich guys who have got to where they are by ripping off the man in the street, paying accountants to make sure they do not have to pay tax, living in tax havens, manipulating state and national legislator, paying bribes and ..... Amazon, Starbucks, Bush and Kennedy families... Joe Kennedy put down a massive amount of money just after and before the war to ensure presidential success for his offspring.
But then what the hell do I know I am a Brit.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

doesn't mean you don't understand what's going on
Good one Annabelle. And every four years we just get the royal screw, different face is all. I hate politics.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

Me too!
Interesting and deep thinking. Good job:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

thank you
Levi Levin

11 Years Ago

Your welcome:) Washington has all the answers dont they? LOL...yeah right...Is the national debt inc.. read more
Wow..what is going on over there? Politics are always fun, aren't they? ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

They're sort of interesting in some aspects

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