I'm living like a love song

swacked the title from Selena Gomez's "I love you like a love song"

"I wanna be drunk when I wake up

On the right side of the wrong bed

Never an excuse I made up

To tell you the truth I hate what

Didn't kill me, It never made me stronger

Never at all"

Drunk- Ed Sheeran

I wanna feel like I've made it

When I get to the end of this pathway

Hoping, praying, making myself sick

To tell you the truth I love it

You didn't kill me, you only made me stronger

Through it all

"I guess you didn't care, and I guess I liked that

But when I fell hard, you took a step back, without me

Without me, without me, without me, me, me, me, me, me"

I knew you were trouble- Taylor Swift

I knew you didn't care, you knew I'd fall for that

Before I could fall hard, I pulled myself back, don't need you

Don't need you, don't need you, don't need you, you, you, you, you, you

"I heard our song on the radio, 

I see your face everywhere I go

I thought I'd call just to let you know

I been thinking of you, thinking of you"

Thinking of you- Kesha

I'll write my words and publish those

You'll see my name everywhere you go

I'm not gonna call, cuz you already know

I'm too good for you, too good for you

Author's Note

Hit me with your best shot

Reviews

[Richard Man]

It's why the dwarves "whistled while they worked" or why soldiers sang "Pack up your troubles in your old kit bag" as they marched off to war. The drudgery, the anxiety, the torment, the excitement, the passion are great and lessened if shared... the same is with love ... basically it's another journey into the unknown and it makes you feel stronger when you sing from the same song sheet as others. Or am I talking a load of crap?

[Annabelle Lee]

It's most definitely not crap. THank you for your time!

[Frieda P]

I knew you were trouble when you walked in.

[Annabelle Lee]

what. me? never

[Frieda P]

That's what Taylor said but what I was thinking. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

I guess I'm a little confused, and I think I'll just leave it at that ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

haha my bad

[KAOlmsted]

Nah, I'm just way too old for your hip cultural references xD I actually enjoyed this.

[icelandicblue]

I love this poem. Those first two lines are a kicker, worthy of a country western song! This is one of my favorites by you.

[Annabelle Lee]

those first two arent mine

[Baby Ricochet]

I feel old

[Annabelle Lee]

"You're only as old as you feel" so....
You ARE old, haha sorry ricochet. Just kidding. My parents hate this music lol.

[quinfinn]

i have played (toyed) with this idea a few times. it is always great fun to see what transpires at the end. you did very well to make this a cohesive and well binded piece instead of a fragmented mish mosh of words. kudos!

[Annabelle Lee]

I started out with the one artist I used in the beginning, I wanted to do a whole rewrite of "Drunk" but I couldn't figure it out so I just sort of messed around a bit untill It seemed right. THanks very much.

[quinfinn]

welcome!

[Be myself!]

I like this. Very creative

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you!

[Be myself!]

your welcome

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit this poem made me laugh. I can so hear this song being sung in my head.

[Annabelle Lee]

those are three songs i would have never put together

[Pax]

nice choices of words and a mixed up was great.
though it portray a sad aura it just right to expressed what you felt.
very nice!
ps. i can't read the yellow, its too bright... just a suggestion ...yellow is never good in a white background, hope you don't mind :)

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks a million. i will fix that

[The Nude Writer]

Really cool style :) I like what you did here

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you!