To Go Meal

I see you, the way you're looking at me
It really seems you like what you see
But all you do is smile and wave
If you want my attentions, you have to be brave
Don't wait for me to make the first move
Because I've looked right past others just like you
If you really want to stand out, here's a tip
Walk over, introduce yourself, that's it!
Come over, ask for my name
And tell me yours,
All guys are the same
Wait for the bimbo to rush to your arm
And choose another tomorrow,
won't do yourself any harm
But if you wanna be mine
You have to put in the time
You'd better sit down and eat your fill
Because boy, I'm no to-go meal

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

I love the whole thing but the ending was amazing. It definitely brought a smile to my face to see the mental image in my head. I can so see you saying that too and it is so true. You go girl. You are definitely much better than that. At least a nice 5 star restaurant meal. ;)

[Annabelle Lee]

haha thanks

[Be myself!]

very nice and creative. I like it.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Be myself!]

Yor welcome

[Relic]

Read this after reading riccochet's poem. I wish I had known this in high school. I look back and wonder what the hell I was thinking. ha A good poem all guys should read.

[Annabelle Lee]

Remind me to thank him for that lol.

[Relic]

:)

[CDseader]

ME LIKEIE A LOT A LOT!!!!!!!! SOOOOOO TRUE!

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks

[Dalia]

that was straight to the point , well done :)

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks.

[KAOlmsted]

Damn straight. Great read, Annabelle. I like that you already know you need to draw them an effing map xD Boys...silly creatures.

[Annabelle Lee]

yes they re.

[Richard Man]

Baby Ricochet has said I should say a big hello.... well ...
Im here... Richard... Annabelle... nice to meet you..sit down.... I like food ... French style... slow... many courses... well cooked... savoury...delicious... do you?

[Annabelle Lee]

Haha why of course lol

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a great poem. The masculine in the dynamic is supposed to be assertive and the feminine the receptive. You know that and I know that but isn't just amazing the people that don't

[Annabelle Lee]

I'm not one that's not going to walk up to a guy... but if he's eyeballing me, he needs to be a man.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes, exactly. That's what he's suppose to do. Be assertive. It's to funny you posted this piece right when I posted my piece "Dominant Male." because they're really saying the same thing

[Annabelle Lee]

a ricochet poem i havent read yet? Im slacking hah.

[icelandicblue]

This is very cute and sassy. It's good to be strong.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you!

[Frieda P]

Like your conviction in this read, you stand your ground Annabelle, you're one tough cookie to be reckoned with. Love the closing....

'I'm no to-go meal'

Priceless. ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks!!!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure always kiddo ;-)