People

People look but they don't see
The person that I'm going to be
People listen but they don't hear
They don't umderstand, won't open their ears
People touch but they don't feel
They can never tell when what they've got is real
People try but don't succeed
And one of those people will not be me.

Reviews

[critic h]

a perfect inspirational with a grave message. the words still echo like the ticking of the clock. join me on your quest for the best. Well poured out your mind but not heart because heart wants to be negative. lucid style and captivating flow of words with a good rhyming scheme. well written.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very true and empowering poem. It takes a lot of strength of character to write such an honest piece. Unfortunately a lot of people do have a hard time seeing the true reality that is right in front of them.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you, Ahmad

[Be myself!]

You rock Annabelle!

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks.

[Be myself!]

Your welcome

[CDseader]

Yup I agree!

[Annabelle Lee]

thanx

[Dalia]

very good
I loved your ambition here
great write :)

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[KAOlmsted]

Absolutely right, girl. Go get 'em.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[KAOlmsted]

Of course.

[Lucien Maier]

nice rhythm and flow.

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks.

[Frieda P]

Kudos Annabelle, and I had no doubts.

'People touch but they do not feel'

Profound, and so true...

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Shadey Jadey]

This is a wonderful write that many people can relate to. Keep up the good work xD

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Night]

Ahh my friend, this write has a deep understanding written all over it...outstanding depth of perception, already the heart of the poet emerges from you...well written piece...Bravo...=)

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.