Pointless Poem

My cat is really fat
Whaddaya think of that
My dog will bark and pee
Doesn't matter much to me
My gerbil went and died
His name was Borris, he was nice
Got another gerbil, It died too
Annabelle, Gerbils don't like you
On the same day the second one croaked
My Lizard Pedro up and choked
Got a hdgehog on the way
He'll get here some other day
I'm tired so I guess I'll tell you to go home
And ask why you read such a pointless poem

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

hedgehog needs an extra E.....But what does that matter to me?.....As for why I read this verse....I spose I could do something worse.......

.I love a bit o' dark humour

[Dalia]

this is really fun .. its amusing to do pointless things some times , for change :D

[Annabelle Lee]

it is.

[PurpleQuartz]

I laughed while reading this poem. You wrote it quite clever!
Poor gerbils...:)

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[quinfinn]

if you had fun writing this then it served its purpose. i had a good time reading it so it served more than one purpose. very entertaining. thank you

[Annabelle Lee]

thnk you.

[quinfinn]

welcome

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit this poem made me laugh very hard inside.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Night]

Very clever indeed...=)

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Be myself!]

This humored me much so. Thanks for this enjoyable read. :)

[Annabelle Lee]

no problem.. thanks for reading.

[Be myself!]

your welcome

[KAOlmsted]

Because you RRed it to me ;-) My cat is enormous...just saying.

[Annabelle Lee]

Arent they the best?

[KAOlmsted]

Absolutely.

[CDseader]

HAHHAHAHAHAHA

[Annabelle Lee]

dont tell diego lol

[Shadey Jadey]

Good mood lifter