Anna

Anna

A Poem by Annabelle Lee

An orb of light in my sister's doorway As I watch television in the downstairs living room
A white figure flashes next to the entertainment display
A flash of light streaming across the room before I can comprehend it
A stream of static electricity.... Moving toward me.
Practicing my flute and see a figure in my doorway
Stop cold in my tracks
Paralyzed for a moment or two
A cold breeze on the back of my neck
Someone is tickling my arm
Sometimes it has a face
Young
Small
Pale
Long dark hair
Round face
Empty grey eyes
Thin nose
White lips
Something tells me her name is Anna
Anna is here.

© 2013 Annabelle Lee


Author's Note

Annabelle Lee
freaky stuff

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why am i thinking of "Poltergeist"? this is really creepy. i have lived in a haunted house, actually, more than once, and it is very similar to this. those little things you catch in the corner of your eye or that cold breeze on your skin, or the hairs standing up on your neck and the floor creaking behind you as you walk. and that series of unexplained sounds....too, too creepy! excellent write! i have a story you might be interested in but i won't advertise it on here because that is tacky and underhanded. pm me if you are interested..... it is a true ghost story

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quinfinn

12 Years Ago

she sees light and goodness in you...be that for her and you will be rid of her soon enough
Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

hmmm. That does make sense.
Salar Majak

12 Years Ago

0.O ok you guys both are freaking me out now!



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Ghost! >< I love them, but they scare the crap out of me! Great creepy poem! :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

ha. thanks.
Very creepy. At least it sounds like she is more curious than dangerous.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

amen to that.
We lived in a house with a spirit when I was your age. I'd always see it just out of the corner of my eye...every now and then you'd hear singing in the bathroom...when no one was in there. Crazy stuff. I am a firm believer in ghosts. You could do with going back and doing some editing on this one, though...I was sitting here going wtf is a prb? *laugh*

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

sorry i wa a bit sleepy.
freaky indeed
reminded me of a horror movie scene :P
nice :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

im living a horrorr film.. great
Creepy- just watched paranormal activity 3 last night- this reminded me of that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

four was better lol.
icelandicblue

12 Years Ago

That's on pay per view so I'll have to wait until its on demand. : )
ok, this is really freaky! love it but i sure don't want to feel something like that in my room, haunted, wow! you're freaking me out!
i love the poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

me niether lol i cant reLly help it though
Salar Majak

12 Years Ago

lol
That is freaky. lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

ikr
Be myself!

12 Years Ago

yea.lol. did it really happen?
OOOH Spookey

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

i seriously tried to call my little brother so i wouldnt have to walk upstairs alone.
Could be nothing...could be something not so good...I have experience with entities...they always look for the light in our world. Sometimes they attach themselves to people or places...or even an object...such as a doll. Ok I'm freaking myself out now...just be careful...=)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

there we go... all the dolls are getting burnt. ha. thanks.
Night

12 Years Ago

...sorry...lol. Dolls and clowns just freak me out too much...=)
Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

Music boxes get me but i still own several.
The mind is a complex struture. I have pycostsis (not sure how to spell that) and so I see stuff that's not really there all the time. For me, this poem captured the inside of my head sometimes. But I think you may have wanted Ana as a ghost. Either way, it works.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

What do you mean?
Kitt

12 Years Ago

I just mean this poem could go for seeing a ghost or for viewing a mental illness in seeing hullinat.. read more
Annabelle Lee

12 Years Ago

oh

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