Clockwork

One O'Clock
Two O'Clock
Three O'Clock
Four
Remembering the way
You walked out that door
Four O'Clock
Five O'Clock
Six O'Clock
Seven
Try to get over
This stupid obsession
Seven O'Clock
Eight O'Clock
Nine O'Clock
Ten
Wishing he
Was more than a friend
Ten O'Clock
Eleven O'Clock
Twelve O'Clock
One
You make me feel stupid
Man I was so dumb
One O'Clock
Two O'Clock
Three O'Clock
Four
Not too long
Before I don't like you anymore

Reviews

[Riley Jules]

This is really cool, makes me think about how i feel about my ex boyfriend lol.

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks

[Mazie Tackett]

clever poem - I bet this is almost every womens feelings at one point or another- Love will make you blind, deaf, insane, obsessed and aloof.This is real proof!

[Annabelle Lee]

ha. thanks!

[Whiskurz]

This was a fun read my friend.....Whisk

[Annabelle Lee]

birthed from the worst possible case of insomnia

[icelandicblue]

I liked your circular journey. It was a clever and fresh take on an old idea. This was a pleasure to read. BTW love your screen name, it's one of my favorite poems.

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank ypu! it really took no creativity on my part. haha thats really my name.

[icelandicblue]

Well, lucky you! I am waiting for someone to write on about me, annelise.

[KAOlmsted]

Rock Around the Clock; Bill Haley and the Comets ;-) You improved upon it, for sure. I like the descending look of the piece, while the words flow down, the realization sinks in...I'm going to get over you...well done.

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you!

[KAOlmsted]

Absolutely...I'm a fan ;-)

[CDseader]

Yup that's what's it is always like and it sucks something bad!!!!!!!!!

[Annabelle Lee]

Haha

[Britt]

Good poem. I enjoyed reading it. :)

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Hate when that happens. Cute!

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks!

[Salar Majak]

wow thinking for hours ! i hate this, not the write, i love the poem. i hate the feeling XD. great job describing it so effortlessly!

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Be myself!]

Good job. It's different. I like it. Good job

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you!

[Be myself!]

Your welcome!