Boom Boom Boom

I know Daddy has dreams sometimes, I get so scared for him that I start having them, too.

Boom Boom Boom
Running through fields
Boom Boom Boom
Explosions left and right
Boom Boom Boom
Try not to count the kills
Boom Boom Boom
Your buddies beside you have all died
Boom Boom Boom
You pick your leg up
Boom Boom Boom
And then you wake up

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a disturbing war song...not a tune I'd want stuck in my head....

[Annabelle Lee]

you and me both

[skipperdeuce]

i'm trying to get better

[Annabelle Lee]

its not your fault daddy.

[Ahmad Cox]

Its like a rhythm of dark destruction in a dream like and beautiful way.

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks

[Pax]

its like a song... my head is singing it with the tune of boom boom pow... though its really sad... Nice poem my friend.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you

[Whiskurz]

This is profoundly heartbreaking.....Well penned my friend....Whisk

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you