One of Mind's Many Fears

Got the Ida of personifying ideas from a new friend of mine, River Page. And the general Idea is coutesy of the ever faithful Pax

her mind comes first, it knows what's right

her heart battles on, it must win this fight

Mind tells heart, "Ice over, be cold!"

Heart says too mind, "You've grown far too old,

Can't you remember youth and love?"

But mind had no time for that, quickly had to grow up

Heart went dormant, absent for years

But she's back stronger than ever

One of Mind's many fears

Reviews

[River Page]

A very forward and direct poem. Also in first person. It is quite different than my style but I cannot complain. Keep up the good work! :)

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you, River! Yes, first person again, It may take me a while to break that habit. I've grown accustomed and set in my style. I've been experimenting on my own and I'm hoping I'll have a new one ready.

[Baby Ricochet]

I think there's a typo in the last line. Good poem.

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks for that.. ill get it fixed