Caffiene

After about 720 miligrams of caffiene

You'll make a big deal

Out of the smallest things

Your mouth swells up

You cry a bit

You might clean because

You just can't sit

You get heavy breathing

You wish you could slow

And after a while

The energy goes

Your breath is still ragged

Your heart still beats fast

You reach for another can

And swear it's your last

Then comes a rush

You don't know what to do

And it's scary because

The caffiene is controlling you

Reviews

[Becky]

This is certainly unique:)

It's scary whenever something that's not you is controlling your life. I think. Never actually experienced that. Even when I get hyper, I just talk really fast.

Some of the rhymes were a bit... forced sounding, but other than that good job.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you! i didnt think caffeine addiction was real until i experienced it. But ive been caffeine free for about.two weeks and am much better

[Baby Ricochet]

Great poem. Coffee's a beautiful thing.

[Annabelle Lee]

i've been cut off though lol

[Brittany]

Haha I know it, mountain dew is sinful!

[Annabelle Lee]

this is no joke brittany girl. I had way too much today and it was scary..... i had to keep moving, i cried my brains out, i even started shaking a bit

scared the hell out of me

[Brittany]

Jesus girl, get a grip! Sorry :( drink oj instead

[Annabelle Lee]

psh... screw that.... water will be all i need from here on out

[Annabelle Lee]

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[Annabelle Lee]

maybe an occasional monster