A Good Poem

This is a bad poem

One about love

One about boyfriends

One about us

This is a bad poem

One about bullies

One about w****s

One about s***s

This is a bad poem

One about high school

One about drama

One about girls

This is a good poem

One about me

One about life

One about my world

Author's Note

Don't get all literal on me, don't be all, "She said my poem wa bad!" NO! What I am trying to say is that writing about those subjects for those specific reasons, with no connection, makes for a bad poem.

Reviews

[afra]

simple but great ..good work

[Annabelle Lee]

thanks

[afra]

my pleasure

[Brittany]

Neat :)

[Annabelle Lee]

haha yeah

[caesarkreshen]

haha.

[Annabelle Lee]

is haha good or bad?

[caesarkreshen]

it's haha. It's not a mocking haha. I think I chuckled at the sentiment of this poem.

[Annabelle Lee]

ok thanks