If I Were A...

Sometimes I get so angry, when people call me names, or when I hear people call my friends names.

If I were a hoe

Would I be with him

And him only

If I were so popular

Would I feel

So lonely

If I were stupid

Would I have 

Straight As

If I were ugly

Would he 

like me that way

If I were fat

Would I be 

So fast

If I were a nerd

Would I ever

Run track

A label is stupid

You should rise above it

If you do not agree

I'll tell you

Just where you can

Shove it

Author's Note

please, if you took the time to read my poem, take a fraction more to review it. Constructive criticism is fully welcomed and appreciated. Thank you!

Reviews

[nigrum homonculus]

this was sick! that ending could not of been put any better. no one was born out of a box. so why label them?

[Annabelle Lee]

exactly my thoughts as I was writing this, thank you!

[Stabitha]

Oh yeah! Well said!

[The Watcher]

How thoughtful and honest... Great poem, and you're definitely right about the labeling in society. Kudos to you!

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you! it mean a lot to me just that you reviewed, I am glad you like it.

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome Anna.

[Brittany]

Good job for standing up for yourself. I liked the poem a lot, it had a great message but sometimes I got lost wondering where a certain stanza started and ended but either way it was FAN-TAS-TIC

[Annabelle Lee]

why thank you, brittany darling. As for stanzas, I will get right on that, thanks for lettin me know!

[Brittany]

Yups

[Annabelle Lee]

better?

[Brittany]

Much

[Annabelle Lee]

k good