Dear You

My best friend is in the grade below me and I am having to cope with the fact that she won't be with me my freshman year

Dear You, 

It's me

Oh you

Can't you see?

I need you to be in my life

Cuz it just wouldn't be right

My first pep rally 

You were there

You didn't mind

When I cut my hair

That crazy stage

I thought I was so cool

I really must

Have embarrassed you

I tell you everything

And you truly try

To understand my 

Jacked up life

I can't even begin to think

Life without you?

Even a week?

That wouldn't work, we couldn't part

And this step without you

Will surely break my heart

Author's Note

you know who you are

Reviews

[Brittany]

I believe that, that friend will surely miss you as you seem that you will miss her. Another beautiful piece! :)

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you very much.

[Whiskurz]

You write very well my friend......another well penned piece.....Whisk

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you, Whisk, that actually means a lot coming from you. My concern with my own work, however, is that I am lacking in the emotion tht so many other poets seem to bring about so effortlessly, any advice for an amateur such as yours truly?