We Two, Alone and Scared

Here we two

Alone and scared

Sit beside

A bank of tears

Can't remember

Can't recall

How did it come to this?

Back away

Don't come near

We two alone and scared

Break the bonds

How did it come to this?

A time when

We Two, Alone and Scared

Are afraid to go home

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very well put together. Congrats on your winning poem

[Onyx_Rayne]

Beautifully written... a twinge of fear and dread threads itself throughout the entire piece.

"A time when
We Two, Alone and Scared
Are afraid to go home "

... there are so many conclusions one could make of this ending. It can mean something different to each reader - in my opinion, that is one of the marks of a good write, it can mean what the reader needs ...or feels it to mean.

Excellent work :)

[Michael Kerr]

interesting, if i may ask what does this poem mean to you? i see it from different points of view.
its is good for what its worth.
write some more poems if you can,
-mike-