Loneliness

You know it

You feel it

You want to end it

It's unescapeable

It's practically a war

It's called loneliness...

Your "soul mate" has left you

Has disrrupted your peace

Now you are lost ...lonely...

You know you want to scream

But it doesn't help

You know you want to cry

But what's that gonna' do?

Don't worry

Eventually everybody will feel the power of

  ...loneliness...

Don't let it stop you, though.

Otherwise, trust me, it ain't gonna' do nothin' good

Author's Note

This poem was made by the sadness I endured.

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

An amazing piece that all kinds of people can easily connect to one way or another. (Meaning excellent expression of emotions.) Great work!

[Pax]

Scream if you must, let it out
Don't stop your tears, let it flow, let it go...
release every pain, every lonesomeness...
the power of moving on is never stop walking your life...
eventually the pain will heal, time has the power to be your friend
that you'll know something or someone is just right, just enough, to makes us whole again
somewhere in the hands of time...

for every broken piece of our heart makes us stronger in time...
your strong, this poem brings a expressive emotions in good way of release...
I liked it! Keep it up!

[Felicity's Eve]

*hugs* I so agree with the last stanza. Don't let the sadness consume you. In the wise words of Robert Frost "In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on."

It's good for you to write and I really like how you displayed your emotions through a well-written, straightforward poem that still leaves room for relate-ability. :)

100/100

[DogDrawler]

Thank you. There's probably gonna be three or more poems until I stop crying so don't be surprised if you see more poems like this. *crying* sorry. It's so sad! *crying*

[Felicity's Eve]

*hugs tightly* It's gonna be ok, I promise!

[DogDrawler]

I hope so. I don't know what Megara was thinking. Why did she do this to me?! *crying* First break ups are hard.

[Felicity's Eve]

She's on WC, isn't she?

[DogDrawler]

Yes. That's where we met and fell in love. *sobbing* I still keep archives of messages of times we used to talk to each other.

[Felicity's Eve]

*Hugs* Have you ever met in real life?

[DogDrawler]

No. But we would always make up stories of us meeting. We really hoped we would, though.

[Felicity's Eve]

:/ I'm sorry... No matter if you met in real life or not break ups are hard. I can totally see your pain in this poem.

[DogDrawler]

Yeah. What's awfully unbearable is that my "Someone you love" poem is the complete opposite of this. That's when I celebrated our third month anniversary. Can you check that out?

[Felicity's Eve]

Sure, I'd be happy to :)

[DogDrawler]

Thank you. I think I feel a little better now.

[Felicity's Eve]

Awesome. :)

[DogDrawler]

Do you think I'll ever find another?

[Felicity's Eve]

Honestly, yes. As cheesy as it sounds, there are plenty of other fish in the sea :) They say that if you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you, it's yours forever. If not, then it was never meant to be.

There's a lot of weight in those words and an incredible meaning behind them. So yeah. You'll find another. Most definitely. :)

[DogDrawler]

Thank you. There is one girl on WC I've had a crush on for a while. A old friend named "The Grey Wolf". Do you think she might be it?

[Felicity's Eve]

I know her quite well, actually. And you'll never know if you don't try. I say go for it! :)

[DogDrawler]

Okay! I will! Slowly and smoothly. Wish me luck! Goodnight for now! (Don't tell her I had a crush on her. ;)

[Felicity's Eve]

Lol your secrets safe with me. Though she probably saw this in the news feed XD

Night! :)

[DogDrawler]

Oh, crap! I hope she didn't see that!

[Felicity's Eve]

It'll be fine ^^

[DogDrawler]

Let's hope so. I'd be blushing like crazy.

[Felicity's Eve]

Hehe that's kinda funny to think about XD

[DogDrawler]

Maybe... So at this minute I'm talking to her. We're having a decent conversation. I'm taking this slow; building the likeness of each other.

[Felicity's Eve]

Good idea ^^

[DogDrawler]

Wow! That was easy. I just asked her out and she agreed!

[Felicity's Eve]

Good for you! I'm glad things worked out! :)

[DogDrawler]

Yeah. And uhh... I told her that I had a crush on her. I didn't blush like crazy but SHE did. Then I told her a true compliment about what I liked about her. After that, I guess you could say she liked me too.

[Felicity's Eve]

That's awesome. Keep me posted! ^^

[DogDrawler]

I foretell that you're enjoying the gossip between me and your best friend. :)

[Felicity's Eve]

XD Good guess

[DogDrawler]

I also bet you both will be talking about me when you both message each other. 'Cause it's happened before with Megara.

[Felicity's Eve]

Well, she hasn't brought it up yet .-.

[DogDrawler]

Wait. So you both ARE talking?

[Felicity's Eve]

Yeah. We talk almost everyday.

[DogDrawler]

Wow. So do we. Hmm... What if we all three talk?

[Felicity's Eve]

How would that work? .-.

[DogDrawler]

I've done it before. It can be any place besides messaging. She could comment right now and we could respond. Though I don't want it here.

[Felicity's Eve]

I've done that before.

[DogDrawler]

See... All we have to do is pick a place to talk at.

[Felicity's Eve]

Yeeeep .-.

[DogDrawler]

Djekeio. What?

[Felicity's Eve]

Idk. XD So where are we gonna do this?

[DogDrawler]

How 'bout at my group Wolfpack Poetry?

[Felicity's Eve]

Ok! I didn't know you had a group. :)

[DogDrawler]

Yeah, just go the forum post called: Triple Conversation 1

[eatme]

you had a soul mate?
all my favorite people are imaginary friends in my stories
no wonders writers kill themselves.

[DogDrawler]

Of course I "did" . My girlfriend on the website just dumped me. I basically used my sadness and made a poem out of it.