Someone You Love

You search for him or her

You know you may not find it

The romance you've been looking for

The one you've seen in the movies

But it now it seems lost

Like it was never ment to be

But if you love someome alot

You know you'd do anything

So you let nothing stand in your way

Soon you come across danger

You risk everything

You're hungry, thirsty, and tired

You start to doubt 

That you'll never see him or her again

Like you're a Mexican kid crossing the border

Just so you can see someone you love

The one who'd care, no matter what

So you tell yourself that you mustn't give up

I needn't what I like but what I love 

Just as you come across his or her's house

You pick up a rose from their garden

You knock on the door

What happens next?

That's what you decide.

Author's Note

Yes. I drew that picture. Those of you who can't see. It's a wolf giving his mate a rose. That creature up there is a owl.

Reviews

[Felicity's Eve]

I love the concept of love being a rugged journey, yet there's tender love at the end of it. It's sad, the differences in this poem and your latest. :/

Great poem and cute picture. I love to draw, too, and I'm sure that things you love like writing and drawing will definitely help you. :)

100/100

[DogDrawler]

Yeah. *sniff* It is very sad. :'(

[Felicity's Eve]

It's sad... But it'll get better. You just have to have faith. :)

[bn]

I love that poem, I like romance movies and poems I think it's so interesting, very well done. I'm horrible at writing poems

[DogDrawler]

Thank you!

[Black Cat Fever]

I like your romantic poem and your artwork. Both are excellent!

[Star Wolf]

Awesome! Very romantic and so true!

[Tina Kline]

A very tender and romantic poem. I do like the drawing. In some ways we do influence our lives like you say in the poem...if you don' try you'll never get where it is you want to be!

[Megara]

*snif* Oh my goodness this is the nicest thing anyone has ever done for me!*it is so beautiful that i'm actually crying* Thank you sooo much

[DogDrawler]

Trust me, I would never forget our anniversary.

[Megara]

*snif*every time i look at i start crying:)