White Moon

I looked at the sky 

I saw something odd

The moon itself brighter 

I stopped in my tracks 

And blinked twice more

I took it as a sign 

I wished...

...For love... 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Wonderfully simple and wistful. Who doesn't long for love at one time or another? Great job.

[Broken.Words]

Great write.
love is we all need
but here people no more care for the people and the love in their hearts...~

[MerpJones]

Just great...Good Job Mister Dog drawler

[Star Wolf]

A nice and creative poem. Wishing for love...it's even more important than money if we stop and admit it. I enjoyed this.

[DogDrawler]

Thank you! Glad from hear from you again. I missed you.

[Star Wolf]

Thanks. Glad I finally made it back on here.

[DogDrawler]

You should see the new The Journey of Stormfast chapters!

[Star Wolf]

Yes, I'll be getting back into your story.

[icelandicblue]

What a beautiful poem. The moon in all its forms can be quite inspiring. I like the fact that you wished upon it.

[DogDrawler]

Thank you very much!

[Megara]

did you find love?

[DogDrawler]

I found you

[Megara]

i was hoping you'd say that:)

[PurpleQuartz]

Amazing how you can give so much emotion in few words. Great write!

[DogDrawler]

You know this is true.

[Hatchling]

This is beautiful

[Faolan]

Its awesome!!! My poems stink, but yours rock!!!! I GIVE THIS 10 out of 10