The Journey of Stormfast Part 1: The Cause
A Book by DogDrawler
 Based on Alpha and Omega, Stormfast the fastest wolf of Jasper National Park will go through the journey of his family before him and face his mistake.  © 2013 DogDrawler
Author's Note
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I will not care for any kind opinion you guys share, but I will be glad for your express in feelings.
If you want to learn more, there's a blog for the story guide.
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Overall the book was good. I'm a sucker for details though, and there wasn't much of it. Hope you consider a tune up, because I would love to read it again once you've smoothed it out.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wait, did you just read the entire first part?
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11 Years Ago
yes. I've been reading it for a couple days now. It's a very good book.
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11 Years Ago
Wow. You should know my future chapters are way better detailed because my writing skills improved. .. read moreWow. You should know my future chapters are way better detailed because my writing skills improved. Did you see the new Part: 2?
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11 Years Ago
Yes, but you haven't posted any chapters yet. I'll keep checking up.
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11 Years Ago
What? I have one. Chapter 21: One big night
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11 Years Ago
huh. Stormie? I'm seeing 'No Chapters'. Did you publish it????
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11 Years Ago
Oh, that's something else. I just added that. The book you're looking for is near the bottom of th.. read moreOh, that's something else. I just added that. The book you're looking for is near the bottom of the list of writing.
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11 Years Ago
oh ok. I'll be sure to read it and tell you what I think.
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11 Years Ago
Scratch that. It's in my older writing.
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So I read this whole book and it was good. In some chapters, some of dialogue was confusing and i had to reread it. In some chapters, you could add more detail. But overall it was a great read. Keep it up! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
What? That's what you've been doing this whole time? Well, just to let you know, you haven't read th.. read moreWhat? That's what you've been doing this whole time? Well, just to let you know, you haven't read the best of my writing yet. You should Part 2: The Packs. I'm not finished with it yet but it will be great! (Boy that must've took a while)
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11 Years Ago
Hahaha! Nah, it only took me about maybe one hour and a half to read it. I'm a fast reader. Lol :) o.. read moreHahaha! Nah, it only took me about maybe one hour and a half to read it. I'm a fast reader. Lol :) okay, i'll check it out. :)
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11 Years Ago
I'm a fast reader too. I can read a book four times bigger for only two hours.
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Added on December 8, 2012
Last Updated on February 15, 2013
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DogDrawlerHutto, TX
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Hello, friend. :)
My favorite kind of writing are: animals, sci fi, romance, adventure, fiction, and action.
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Kathryn Lasky
Erin Hunter
H. I. Larry
Gordon Koman
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