Cutie at the Movies

Cutie at the Movies

A Poem by DoeRyan
"

we've all had embarrassing moments like these. never be afraid of expressing your feelings, even if you look like a complete idiot.

"
hello Miss, 
I have come a long way.
I think its about time for me to
say what I need to say.

excuse my inexperience,
I'm incredibly shy.
I'm a little bit curious about
how to express my mind.

 all air in my lungs was lost when I first saw you,
you swooned me.
I needed to move closer before the
beginning of the movie.

I moved a seat, 
then another, then another.
you started to notice me, 
and I started to shudder.

the trailers are almost over,
I needed to act fast.
 if I talked during the movie,
I'd look like a jackass.

your one seat away, 
I'm paralyzed with fear.
you flash me a smile,
I'm grinning ear to ear.

the moment is nigh,
there is no going back.
I open my mouth to say hi,
and my damn voice cracked.

the audio started to roar, 
the movie began.
I'm so embarrassed my cheeks are sore, 
I almost got up and ran.

the movie ended,
you left quickly.
I just sat there,
thinking "god just kill me".

that's when I noticed you left your phone,
I needed to make haste.
I thought my chances were blown,
to make up my past disgrace.

so here you go,
I'm sure you would have missed it...
tonight's moon has a beautiful glow,
you know what, I should just quit.

goodbye, I hope you have a lovely day,
that movie was a hoot!
what did I want to tell you?
oh, that's simple.

I think you're cute.
 

© 2018 DoeRyan


Author's Note

DoeRyan
just a humorous little tale of cringe.

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That was so cute! We have all felt that way at sometime in our life. That was fun to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


If you'd substitute a library card (or something similar) for that phone, this could've been my story from 1962. I had to grin while reading, because it seemed like you'd stolen my playbook. The movie theater is exactly the place where I made my first romantic moves on girls--one seat closer at a time. A great little poem/story--I love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Such a cute poem. Enjoyed reading it. I smiled I giggled I could understand your mood.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 8, 2018
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Tags: cute, happy, crush, love, poem, cringe, movies

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